Film pitch feedback

The feedback that I got was relatively similar all throughout I have a good story which follows the three act narrative structure however there were conflicting views on whether I will be able to fit the story in five mins some people said there was too little some people say that I have too much moving on to the three act narrative structure there were positive reviews on how it follows it by having a beginning middle and end finally people said the idea was doable but I need to think about the public at the time of shooting as to not cause alarm as well as this think about time of day and locations when shooting.

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